broken 0 Posted May 6, 2016 #1 Share Posted May 6, 2016 (edited) Profile Username: Broken Real name: Roxie Richter Age: 18 Gender: female Height: 5’ 5” About: History/personality Roxie is a fairly short girl, standing at about five foot five inches tall. She has long, black hair that reaches just above her knees. She also has grey eyes, but usually puts contacts in to make them look red. One of her most noticeable features is the shadow below each of her eyes, a result of her being an insomniac. She usually wears a spaghetti-strap, short white dress, tan boots, and a necklace with a cross on it. However, on certain occasions, she wears a long sleeve, white dress that is the same length, black stockings, tan boots, her cross necklace, a red cape with a hood, and a red and white cat mask. She usually wears the cape and mask to hide her identity from others. Roxie lives with her younger brother and father in life outside the game. She also goes to high school and is about to begin college. Virtues: Silence: While some consider this a flaw, this is good for her. This allows her to keep her important facts to herself. She would rather keep things to herself until she can trust someone. Courtesy: She was raised to be courteous of herself and others, but she is only like this if she needs to be. She puts on a ‘good girl’ act for the bigger groups, using manners to gain an advantage. She is more respectful to others than herself. Helpfulness: She is always willing to help when it comes to missions and quests, just as long as she gets something out of it. She doesn’t even care if it’s something small, she will always help. She is very thorough with her plans, making her a good partner. Flaws: Curious: Ever since she was a kid, she has been curious about the world around her. This can sometimes cause her to be placed in dangerous situations because often times she doesn’t think things through. She is also at a greater risk of getting lost. Pessimist: Her self-esteem wavers constantly, and she doesn't think people actually like her. She has a grim outlook on life, as most of her thoughts involve insulting others or herself. She believes no one will ever beat the game and that she will be stuck here forever. Timid: This is a flaw of her silent attitude. She is very shy, to the point where she is nervous to be in big groups. However, sometimes she can come out of her shell if she thinks of something that will help the group. She is uncomfortable with the idea of becoming close to other people, and still does not consider anyone she has meet friends. Profession: Skills Unused: 5SP Non-combat: » Passive: » Combat: » Weapon skills: » Inventory Weapons/Tools: » Beginners Pack (10 Bread, 15 water, cloth clothing) » One Handed Dagger Roleplays » » Relationships Story Thus Far Edited May 6, 2016 by broken Link to post Share on other sites
Ariel - The Crowned Lion 0 Posted May 6, 2016 #2 Share Posted May 6, 2016 After you finish making the necessary modifications, please PM me so I can re-evaluate your journal. Your character's username must be the username of your forum account, 'broken' in your case. In the "About: History/personality" please add some background and personality related text, what you have currently is mostly her exterior appearance. Quote "Your Journals History/About Me should have at least 1-2 paragraphs. This gives your character a depth and history, it explains why they act the way they act. Does your character hate the snow? Why? Put that in the character descriptions! " There is no 'Cooking' skill in this forum but there is the Cook profession which can be attained after completing the <<Earning a Living>> quest found HERE, once your journal gets approved. For now leave the 'Profession' section blank as it currently is. You cannot have all of the rest of the listed skills as you start with only 5 SP that can be invested in just achieving the 1st rank of certains skills. For more information on the skill system check it out here! On a personal note, I'd recommend reading the "SAO Site Guide: Tutorials, Rules and More!" for the official guide/rules/etc, then refer the "The Beginners Guide to SAO" for a more personal representation of the rules, from a player's point of view. Link to post Share on other sites
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