Susan Stark 0 Posted August 17, 2014 #1 Share Posted August 17, 2014 Susan was walking in the streets of the starting city, in yet another dull day. Until now she didn't take act. She worked part time as a shop assistant in a tailoring shop, without actually ever learning anything. This, was wrong, she thought. "Until now I've only leeched out Keiko. I should ask her to teach me..." she continued in her head, taking a street to the right, heading to Keiko's shop, where she worked. The shop was closed for customers, but not for her, that worked there. She stepped in, and said, with a proud smile < Keiko! Teach me your secrets, please. I want to become a tailor! >. The woman looked at her, with a small laugh, answering < Finally you made up your mind > Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 17, 2014 Author #2 Share Posted August 17, 2014 The shopkeeper looked at her with a proud smile. She was a woman in her forties. She could've been easily her mother < I will teach you, Susan... But you will have to earn it. And with that, I mean that the first duty of a good tailor is to have good quality materials. Otherwise, the armor and clothing we make would be useless, right? >. Susan nooded, listening carefully, as she caressed the hilt of her rapier. She easily understood what the woman meant: she had to fight to earn her materials. Keiko smiled again, opening the door that led outside, saying < Follow me. I'll show you my hunting grounds. > Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 17, 2014 Author #3 Share Posted August 17, 2014 The young girl had a sly smile, as she followed her mentor. She didn't like to fight, it was... Rather scary. But she was confident she could attack the monsters of this floor. In the end, it was the first floor, right? So the two walked out of the city, in a nearby hill, where Keiko pointed a monster. It was a big rat < It doesn't look like it, but these drop good starting materials! > she said, smiling. And Susan smiled back, saying < Watch me, Sensei >. The girl unsheated her rapier, and quickly dashed forward, trying to hit her enemy. But she tripped, and it evaded, making a strange sound, as if it was mocking her. RAT: 3/3 hp ATTACK: EPIC FAIL Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 17, 2014 Author #4 Share Posted August 17, 2014 Susan quickly stood up, panting a little. This was her first combat in a while, indeed. So she looked back at Keiko, that smiled at her, trying to keep her spirit high. Susan ran towards the rat, again, trying to stab him with her Starting Rapier, the most basic weapon available. But again, she tripped the very first step, with a solid < Offf~ > as she fell. RAT: 3/3 hp Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 17, 2014 Author #5 Share Posted August 17, 2014 This time she was starting to get really pissed off. She HAD to hit that damned rat! Keiko laughed, a few far away, as Susan stepped forward, and initiated a combat move towards the enemy, the mighty rat! Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 17, 2014 Author #6 Share Posted August 17, 2014 She missed again. But this time, it was the rat who dodged. She kept close to the rat, who looked like an easy mod. He didn't attack yet, at least. She stepped back, since she couldn't use a slash motion, and instantly initiated anothe battle motion. Again, she failed.and the rat was still unharmed. Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 17, 2014 Author #7 Share Posted August 17, 2014 This was starting to get ridiculous. She couldn't land a hit, yet, and she had to hit it three times. It looked like an impossible feat. But backing down to a rat was no option. She couldn't face her sensei, if she retreated. Again, she initiated the simple motion needed to dash and attack that dog sized rodent. Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 17, 2014 Author #8 Share Posted August 17, 2014 Yet again, she failed, with the rat dodging her hit. She panted a little, sincr her stamina wasn't really high, but didn't stop. Right after that motion she quickly initiated another skill movement, tryint to stab it multiple times. She finally could hit it! She felt the sword stab the rat, and retracted the sword, now reddened from its blood. RAT: 2/3 hp Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 17, 2014 Author #9 Share Posted August 17, 2014 She wasted no time, in keeping the fight going. She kept on hitting him, discovering a chained combo, as she tried to stab it in the head, after that flurry. And she hit again, with a smile of exstasy in her face. Yes, she didn't like fighting at first... But once she was winning, she actually liked it. RAT: 1/3 hp Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 17, 2014 Author #10 Share Posted August 17, 2014 Yes! One last hit 'till the defeat of that puny monster! She stepped back and whipped her rapier to the air with a quick gesture of her wrist, making the blood on it drip off. It was the last hit, if it landed. And it did. The monster disappeared, and no loot appeared, apart from a little bag of money: 15 cor. She smiled and grabbed it, saying < I killed it! But it has no drop... > a little sad with it. The gentle keiko smiled and said < Don't worry, I'll lend you some of mine... The important is that you get the basics. Let's head back now. > RAT: 0/3 hp +30 cor Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 19, 2014 Author #11 Share Posted August 19, 2014 We start to head back to the City, its lights showing the way from the outskirts of it, where we were. I look to Keiko, and ask < Sensei... I know it's sudden, but... Can you talk me of who you were, in the real world? >. Keiko looks surprised, and says < I... I was a businesswoman. I never was at home, and I liked to play games in my air trips... I was in a flight, when we got stuck. > a sad smile appears in her face, as we enter the shop < I can seek redemption in staying with you, at least... You remind me of my daughter, Kei > she smiles, and sits down to the workdesk < Come here, I'll show you > Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 19, 2014 Author #12 Share Posted August 19, 2014 Keiko quickly grabs some tissue and a needle, and the crafting screen pops up. She shows Susan the movements, and sees the rolling dice of the crafting, making a critical. The woman smiles, saying "Oh! How lucky! Now, you try!" Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 19, 2014 Author #13 Share Posted August 19, 2014 I listen, silent, to her story, watching her as the bolts of cloth unite, producing a dress. I smile, and grab some cloth and the needle. The crafting interface pops up, and as I try to repeat the movements Keiko made, it unocks me the profession. I start to try sewing that cloth, but to no use. Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 19, 2014 Author #14 Share Posted August 19, 2014 < Relax > says Keiko, with a gentle smile < It will happen over and over, as you learn this profession. Sometimes it will even be a critical fail, and you will have to start from scratch. But... Trust me, you'll be able to craft your own armor in no time, this way! > Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 19, 2014 Author #15 Share Posted August 19, 2014 Susan nodded, quite serious, as she looked again at Keiko. The woman was once again sewing a cloth with her needle, watching the crafting HUD roll, as she said < It's important that you keep trying, Susan... This is the only way you can level up your crafting profession > she said, smiling < And... Remember, you are good at drawing sketches of dresses. This is the right profession for you, I look forward to wear something crafted from you > Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 19, 2014 Author #16 Share Posted August 19, 2014 Keiko once again crafted a dress, and gave Susan the needle. Without a word, Susan grabbed some cloth, and selected from the HUD a template of what she was trying to craft. A simple dress, with no particular stats. She initiated the movements, quickly, since these were computer-made movements, but once again she failed. The needle broke. Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 19, 2014 Author #17 Share Posted August 19, 2014 < Goddamnit! > she ranted, angry, with totally no patience in what she was doing. Keiko chuckled and caressed her hair to relax her < I know it's hard, the first times. But remember: keep trying. Keep trying, and you'll eventually succed. > Susan sighed and raised her head to watch her, muttering < Yes Sensei... > and once again grabbed a piece of cloth, ready to try, once again. Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 19, 2014 Author #18 Share Posted August 19, 2014 This time, finally, Susan succeded. The cloth in her hands transformed in a simple, pink dress. It didn't look like an armor, but more like a casual dress. She smiled, proud, saying < Look, Sensei! > handing her the newly crafted item < Feel it, it's so... Silky! >. She was mesmerized from how it felt having something made from her own hands. Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 19, 2014 Author #19 Share Posted August 19, 2014 Keiko took the dress and looked at it. She hit the preview button and looked at her with the dress putted on, and smiled < It feels great. You did it, Susan. You see? It's just a matter of decision. You just have to try, and try, and try. > she nodded, with a smile. Susan smiled and said < Thanks, Sensei! > and stood up, making a deep bow < I owe you a debt. > she said, quite cerimoniously. Link to post Share on other sites
Susan Stark 0 Posted August 19, 2014 Author #20 Share Posted August 19, 2014 < No, no > shook her head, Keiko < You don't have to bow to me, Susan. You have to stand up proud, and make your way up to the upper floors. > she looked at her, with a smile < You are like a daughter to me. I wish for you to win this game... An old woman like me should stay here, and outfit the adventurers. But you... You shouldn't become a crafter like me. You should craft your own equipment, and use it to become stronger! > Link to post Share on other sites
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