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this needs to be re-evaluated I guess

 

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Item Name: Direwolf Boots

Type: Boots

Description: a pair of grey boots with black edges. Gives the user more evasion than normal, like a direwolf on the hunt

Enhancements: +2 evasion

Quality: Rare

 

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Item Name: Direwolf Ring

Type: Lucky Charm

Description:a grey ring with an insignia of a wolf. Gives more evasion to anyone who wears it

Enhancements: +2 evasion

Quality: Rare

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Item Name: Direwolf Ring

Type: Lucky Charm

Description:a grey ring with an insignia of a wolf. Gives more evasion to anyone who wears it

Enhancements: +2 evasion

Quality: Rare

 

Denied. Assuming that the boots are made of leather, they do not need to be re-evaled, because leather armor can have evasion.

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I messed up on the enhancement, and would like this item to be re-evaluated.

 

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Item: Vulcan's Edge

Quality: Perfect

Enhancement(s): +2 Damage, +1 Burn

DescriptionCrafted by the Time Smith, Noctis. The sword is infused with the power of fire, and blessed by the God of Fire, Vulcan. The outline of the blade is lined with flame, which burns its victims to a crisp. With the power of Vulcan, anyone opposing the user will take immense damage and take on a burning effect.

 

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Item: Shezmu's Edge

Quality: Perfect

Enhancement(s): +2 Damage, +1 Bleed

DescriptionCrafted by the Time Smith, Noctis. The sword is infused with the power of blood, and blessed by the God of Blood, Shezmu. The outline of the blade is lined with blood red needles, which causes its victims to bleed. With the power of Shezmu, anyone opposing the user will take immense damage and take on a bleeding effect.

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[10955] CD: 12
Item-Type: Miniature
Name: Aincrad Castle
Quality: Perfect
Description: A small wooden replica of the floating castle of Aincrad. An elegant yet simple design. The miniature grants the holder an accuracy boost and heightens their sense of blood lust. Traits: +2 Bleed + 1 Accuracy.
 
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Name: Castle Aincrad
Your Profession: Artisan
Your Rank: 3
ID: 10955
Roll: 12
Item Type: Lucky Charm
Quality: Perfect
Enhancements: Crafting Die (+1 CD)
Description: A small wooden replica of the floating castle of Aincrad. An elegant yet simple design. The miniature seems to give the beholder a better chance at crafting better items.

 

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[11249] Craft Die: 12
Item Type: Jewelry
Item Name: Moonlight Ring
Quality: Perfect
Description: This band allows the user to control their feral instincts. It has the capacity to increase one's controlled blood-lust and precision in executing blows. Traits: +2 Bleed and +1 Accuracy.

 

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Name: Moonlight Ring
Your Profession: Artisan
Your Rank: 3
ID: 11249
Roll: 12
Item Type: Lucky Charm
Quality: Perfect
Enhancements: +2 Accuracy and +1 Evasion
Description: This band allows the user to control better control over their actions. It also has the capacity to increase one's speed when evading blows.
 
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[11583] Craft Die: 11
Item Type: Jewelry
Item Name: Rosary of Madness
Quality: Rare
Description: This beaded necklace makes the user lose control of their minds. It forces them to embrace there blood lust and cave into the darkness. Traits: +2 Bleed.
 
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Name: Rosary of Madness
Your Profession: Artisan
Your Rank: 3
ID: 11583
Roll: 11
Item Type: Lucky Charm
Quality: Rare
Enhancements: +2 Accuracy
Description: This beaded necklace makes the user gain greater control over their precision when attacking.
 
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Item: Vampiric Boots
Item type : Light armor 
Quality: Uncommon
Enhancement: +1 Life Steal
Shop: The Lion's Den
Description : A pair of dark crimson boots that allow the user to suck the life out of enemies.

 

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Name: Vampiric Boots
Your Profession: Artisan
Your Rank: 3
ID: Gift
Roll: Gift
Item Type: Leather Armor
Quality: Uncommon
Enhancements: +1 Damage Mitigation
Description: A pair of dark crimson boots that gives protection to the user from their enemies.
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Item: Shezmu's Edge

Quality: Perfect

Enhancement(s): +2 Damage, +1 Bleed

DescriptionCrafted by the Time Smith, Noctis. The sword is infused with the power of blood, and blessed by the God of Blood, Shezmu. The outline of the blade is lined with blood red needles, which causes its victims to bleed. With the power of Shezmu, anyone opposing the user will take immense damage and take on a bleeding effect.

 

Approved.

 

Name: Castle Aincrad

Your Profession: Artisan
Your Rank: 3
ID: 10955
Roll: 12
Item Type: Lucky Charm
Quality: Perfect
Enhancements: Crafting Die (+1 CD)
Description: A small wooden replica of the floating castle of Aincrad. An elegant yet simple design. The miniature seems to give the beholder a better chance at crafting better items.

Approved.

 

Name: Moonlight Ring

Your Profession: Artisan
Your Rank: 3
ID: 11249
Roll: 12
Item Type: Lucky Charm
Quality: Perfect
Enhancements: +2 Accuracy and +1 Evasion
Description: This band allows the user to control better control over their actions. It also has the capacity to increase one's speed when evading blows.

Approved.

 

Name: Rosary of Madness

Your Profession: Artisan
Your Rank: 3
ID: 11583
Roll: 11
Item Type: Lucky Charm
Quality: Rare
Enhancements: +2 Accuracy
Description: This beaded necklace makes the user gain greater control over their precision when attacking.

Approved.

 

Name: Vampiric Boots

Your Profession: Artisan
Your Rank: 3
ID: Gift
Roll: Gift
Item Type: Leather Armor
Quality: Uncommon
Enhancements: +1 Damage Mitigation
Description: A pair of dark crimson boots that gives protection to the user from their enemies.

Denied. Leather armor cannot have damage mitigation.

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Name of ItemAmateru ("Shining in Heaven")

Crafted by: Tyger, Catfish Forge

Type: Heavy Armor

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Lifesteal, +1 Accuracy

 

Description: A perfect set of armor to protect a loved one.

 

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Name of ItemAmateru ("Shining in Heaven")

Crafted by: Tyger, Catfish Forge

Type: Heavy Armor

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Heavy Momentum, +1 DMG Mitigation

Description: A perfect set of armor to protect a loved one.

 

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Name of Item: Knight's Guard

Crafted by: Tyger, Catfish Forge

Type: Bracers

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Bleed, +1 Accuracy

Description: Black and Gold Gauntlets with the power to do some massive damage, accurately at that.

 

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Name of Item: Livery Collar

Crafted by: Tyger, Catfish Forge

Type: Tinket

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Accuracy, +1 EVA

Description: This chain of office was a knight or lord's symbol of authority, and now helps grant the wearer authority on the battlefield.

 

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Name: Silver Sights 

Crafted byTyger, Catfish Forge
Armor Type: Heavy Bracers
Rarity: Rare
Description: A heavy set of metal bracers, carved with the intent of increasing one's accuracy.
Effect: +2 Accuracy

 

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Name: Silver Sights 

Crafted byTyger, Catfish Forge
Armor Type: Trinket
Rarity: Rare
Description: A pair of glasses that increase the wearer's accuracy.
Effect: +2 Accuracy

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Name: Draconic Plate

Type: Chestplate

Rarity: Perfect

Effect: +2 Evasion, +1 Paralyse

Description: A jagged, red and black chestplate forged from the skin and bones of a dragon.

To

Name: Draconic Plate

Type: Chestplate

Rarity: Perfect

Effect: +2 Mitigation, +1 Momentum

Description: A jagged, red and black chestplate forged from the skin and bones of a dragon.

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Name: Serrated Draconic Claws

Type: Gauntlets

Rarity: Rare

Effect: +2 Accuracy

Description: Dark gloves inlaid with dragon teeth on the knuckles

To

Name: Wyvern Tooth Charm

Type: Trinket

Rarity: Rare

Effect: +2 Accuracy

Description: A large, black dragon's tooth the size of a human finger.

--

Name: Potion of Accurate Follower

Type: Potion

Rarity: Uncommon

Effect: Increases familiar dice by +1 for a battle.

Description: A dark purple potion

To

Name: Eth's Magic Water

Type: Potion

Rarity: Uncommon

Effect: Antidote

Description: A crystal pot filled with liquid as pure as glacier water

--

Name: Potion of Fortify Familiar

Type: Potion

Rarity: Uncommon

Effect: +1 familiar damage for a battle

Description: A dark purple potion, swirling with black streaks

To

Name: Curarive Concoction

Type: Potion

Rarity: Uncommon

Effect: HP Recovery

Description: A small glass vial full of generic red fluid

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Name: Rattler Venom

Type: Potion

Rarity: Uncommon

Effect: 1 turn paralysis on hit, single use.

To

Name: Eth's Magic Water

Type: Potion

Rarity: Uncommon

Effect: Antidote

Description: A crystal pot filled with liquid as pure as glacier water

--

Name: Pot of Boiling tar

Type: Potion

Rarity: Uncommon

Effect: Causes 3 turns of burning for 1 damage if weapon hits.

To

Name: Curarive Concoction

Type: Potion

Rarity: Uncommon

Effect: HP Recovery

Description: A small glass vial full of generic red fluid

--

Name: Basic HP Potion

Type: Potion

Rarity: Uncommon

Effect: Restores 2 HP per post for 3 posts

To

Name: Mercury Water

Type: Potion

Rarity: Uncommon

Effect: Damage Mitigation

Description: A silver liquid stored inside a hollow bull's horn

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NameRoar

Made By: Tyger, Catfish Forge

Type: Shield

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Thorns, +1 Accuracy

Description: A snarling, powerful shield. Who would want to mess with a feline?

 

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NameRoar

Made By: Tyger, Catfish Forge

Type: Shield

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Thorns, +1 Damage Mitigation

Description: A snarling, powerful shield. Who would want to mess with a feline?

 

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NameThe Tiger's Hide

Crafted byTyger, Catfish Forge

Armor Type: Heavy Armor

Rarity: Perfect

Description: The Tiger's Hide.

Effect: +2 Damage Mitigation, +1 Accuracy

 

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NameThe Tiger's Hide

Crafted byTyger, Catfish Forge

Armor Type: Heavy Armor

Rarity: Perfect

Description: The Tiger's Hide.

Effect: +2 Damage Mitigation, +1 Heavy Momentum

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> Draconic Plate (Perfect) (+2 Evasion, +1 Paralyse)

To

> Draconic Plate (Perfect) (+2 Damage Mitigation, +1 Momentum)

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> Serrated Draconic Claws (Rare) (+2 Accuracy)

To

> Dragon Tooth Charm (Rare) (+2 Accuracy)

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Potion of Accurate Follower (Uncommon):

Increases familiar dice by +1 for a battle.

To

Eth's Magic Water (Uncommon):

Antidote

--

Potion of Fortify Familiar (Uncommon):

A dark purple potion, swirling with black streaks. +1 familiar damage for a battle.

To

Curarive Concoction (Uncommon):

HP Recovery

--

Rattler Venom (Uncommon):

1 turn paralysis on hit, single use.

To

Eth's Magic Water (Uncommon):

Antidote

--

Pot of Boiling tar (Uncommon?):

Causes 3 turns of burning for 1 damage if weapon hits.

To

Curarive Concoction (Uncommon):

HP Recovery

--

Basic HP Potion (Uncommon):

Restores 2 HP per post for 3 posts

To

Mercury Water (Uncommon):

Damage Mitigation

 

Denied. Please use the correct format for items. That said, I didn't see a problem with what you were turning the items into, you just need to put it into the correct format and fill in all the appropriate fields.

 

 

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NameRoar

Made By: Tyger, Catfish Forge

Type: Shield

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Thorns, +1 Accuracy

Description: A snarling, powerful shield. Who would want to mess with a feline?

 

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NameRoar

Made By: Tyger, Catfish Forge

Type: Shield

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Thorns, +1 Damage Mitigation

Description: A snarling, powerful shield. Who would want to mess with a feline?

 

OLD

 

NameThe Tiger's Hide

Crafted byTyger, Catfish Forge

Armor Type: Heavy Armor

Rarity: Perfect

Description: The Tiger's Hide.

Effect: +2 Damage Mitigation, +1 Accuracy

 

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NameThe Tiger's Hide

Crafted byTyger, Catfish Forge

Armor Type: Heavy Armor

Rarity: Perfect

Description: The Tiger's Hide.

Effect: +2 Damage Mitigation, +1 Heavy Momentum

 

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Name of ItemAmateru ("Shining in Heaven")

Crafted by: Tyger, Catfish Forge

Type: Heavy Armor

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Lifesteal, +1 Accuracy

 

Description: A perfect set of armor to protect a loved one.

 

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Name of ItemAmateru ("Shining in Heaven")

Crafted by: Tyger, Catfish Forge

Type: Heavy Armor

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Heavy Momentum, +1 DMG Mitigation

Description: A perfect set of armor to protect a loved one.

 

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Name of Item: Knight's Guard

Crafted by: Tyger, Catfish Forge

Type: Bracers

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Bleed, +1 Accuracy

Description: Black and Gold Gauntlets with the power to do some massive damage, accurately at that.

 

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Name of Item: Livery Collar

Crafted by: Tyger, Catfish Forge

Type: Tinket

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Accuracy, +1 EVA

Description: This chain of office was a knight or lord's symbol of authority, and now helps grant the wearer authority on the battlefield.

 

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Name: Silver Sights 

Crafted byTyger, Catfish Forge

Armor Type: Heavy Bracers

Rarity: Rare

Description: A heavy set of metal bracers, carved with the intent of increasing one's accuracy.

Effect: +2 Accuracy

 

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Name: Silver Sights 

Crafted byTyger, Catfish Forge

Armor Type: Trinket

Rarity: Rare

Description: A pair of glasses that increase the wearer's accuracy.

Effect: +2 Accuracy

 

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6934 10 Uncommon Knotted Shield http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=366436

7176 10 Uncommon Swift Boots http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=366869

7582 9 Uncommon The Redwall http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=367887

7702 10 Uncommon The Knight's Castoff http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=368385

7700 11 Rare Blood-Seeker http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=368385

7904 9 Uncommon Lightning Boots http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=369044

8166 7+1=8 Uncommon Death of Ares http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=369770

8320 8 Uncommon The Late Boots http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=370098

8996 10+1=11 Rare The Dodgers http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=371410

8999 9+1=10 Rare Fenrir's Binding http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=371410

6800 LD 20 Uncommon Feline Grace http://www.sao-rpg.c...leted/?p=366148

 

Formatted it as best I could. Going through this was heck enough XD

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Name: Phoenix Wing

Your Profession: Performer

Your Rank: Rank 1 Performer

ID: 4829

Roll: 12

Item Type: Long-Straight Sword

Quality: Perfect

Enhancements: +3 Dmg

Description: Designed to wipe out and keep out. Encrypted with flame-like sharp edges the color of orange, like majestic phoenix wings. Just like the phoenix, it is powerful as well as it is fast to swing. Enemies who take damages from the edge will often have marks scarred on their body. This deadly weapon is designed to eliminate its targets without question.

 

 

(This isn't my Forge. I'm a little oblivious to this, so feel free to correct me)

 

Item name:Phoenix Wing

Item type:Long-Straight Sword

Enhancements: Long-Straight Sword

Shop: Ashes and Embers

Description:  Designed to wipe out and keep out. Encrypted with flame-like sharp edges the color of orange, like majestic phoenix wings. Just like the phoenix, it is powerful as well as it is fast to swing. Enemies who take damages from the edge will often have marks scarred on their body. This deadly weapon is designed to eliminate its targets without question.

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Name: Phoenix Wing

Your Profession: Performer

Your Rank: Rank 1 Performer

ID: 4829

Roll: 12

Item Type: Long-Straight Sword

Quality: Performer

Enhancements: Long-Straight Sword

Description: Designed to wipe out and keep out. Encrypted with flame-like sharp edges the color of orange, like majestic phoenix wings. Just like the phoenix, it is powerful as well as it is fast to swing. Enemies who take damages from the edge will often have marks scarred on their body. This deadly weapon is designed to eliminate its targets without question.

 

 

(This isn't my Forge. I'm a little oblivious to this, so feel free to correct me)

 

Item name:Phoenix Wing

Item type:Long-Straight Sword

Enhancements: Long-Straight Sword

Shop: Ashes and Embers

Description:  Designed to wipe out and keep out. Encrypted with flame-like sharp edges the color of orange, like majestic phoenix wings. Just like the phoenix, it is powerful as well as it is fast to swing. Enemies who take damages from the edge will often have marks scarred on their body. This deadly weapon is designed to eliminate its targets without question.

 

Denied. Long-straight sword isn't an enhancement, and performer is not a quality. Please re-write.

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Name: Phoenix Wing

Your Profession: Performer

Your Rank: Rank 1 Performer

ID: 4829

Roll: 12

Item Type: Long-Straight Sword

Quality: Perfect

Enhancements: +3 Dmg

Description: Designed to wipe out and keep out. Encrypted with flame-like sharp edges the color of orange, like majestic phoenix wings. Just like the phoenix, it is powerful as well as it is fast to swing. Enemies who take damages from the edge will often have marks scarred on their body. This deadly weapon is designed to eliminate its targets without question.

 

Aye! ^^

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Name: Phoenix Wing

Your Profession: Performer

Your Rank: Rank 1 Performer

ID: 4829

Roll: 12

Item Type: Long-Straight Sword

Quality: Perfect

Enhancements: +3 Dmg

Description: Designed to wipe out and keep out. Encrypted with flame-like sharp edges the color of orange, like majestic phoenix wings. Just like the phoenix, it is powerful as well as it is fast to swing. Enemies who take damages from the edge will often have marks scarred on their body. This deadly weapon is designed to eliminate its targets without question.

 

Aye! ^^

 

 

So what you need to do there is put down who forged it for you. The dice roll linked is for a good quality item, however, not a perfect one. That said, the profession and rank section are for the character who created it (it's okay if you don't have that information). However, the dice roll to create the item is important. Do you have a link to the post of where you got/bought the item? Item type you're going for woudl be "One Hand Straight Sword" to align with the skill required to use it.

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6934 10 Uncommon Knotted Shield http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=366436

 

7176 10 Uncommon Swift Boots http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=366869

 

7582 9 Uncommon The Redwall http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=367887

 

7702 10 Uncommon The Knight's Castoff http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=368385

 

7700 11 Rare Blood-Seeker http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=368385

 

7904 9 Uncommon Lightning Boots http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=369044

 

8166 7+1=8 Uncommon Death of Ares http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=369770

8320 8 Uncommon The Late Boots http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=370098

 

8996 10+1=11 Rare The Dodgers http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=371410

8999 9+1=10 Rare Fenrir's Binding http://www.sao-rpg.c...forge/?p=371410

6800 LD 20 Uncommon Feline Grace http://www.sao-rpg.c...leted/?p=366148

 

 

Formatted it as best I could. Going through this was heck enough XD

 

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» ItemGreen Raincoat

Item type : Heavy Coat 

Quality: Perfect

Enhancement+2 Thorns +1 Damage Mitigation

Shop:  The Lion's Den

Description : Large green raincoat that has a tail with pink ribbon attached with a pair of rabbit-ear hood

 

» Name of ItemSvalinn

Type: Shield

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +1 acc +2 Damage Mitigation

Description: A black and golden shield, depicting a story of demons and a young woman. Symbolic, no?

 

» Name of ItemMjolnir

Type: Weapon (Mace)

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Lifesteal +1 Damage

DescriptionMjolnir is typically depicted as a large, square-headed gray lump hammer. It has a short, round handle wrapped in brown leather, culminating in a looped lanyard. 

It got lightnings covering it's hammer head, and glows a faint bluish color that looks like that of a Lightning.

 

 

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» ItemGreen Raincoat

Item type : Heavy Coat 

Quality: Perfect

Enhancement +3 Damage Mitigation

Shop:  The Lion's Den

Description : Large green raincoat that has a tail with pink ribbon attached with a pair of rabbit-ear hood

 

» Name of ItemSvalinn

Type: Shield (Heavy Tower Shield)

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +1 Safe-Guard +2 Thorns

Description: A black and golden shield, depicting a story of demons and a young woman. Symbolic, no?

 

» Name of ItemMjolnir

Type: Weapon (Mace)

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Acc +1 Damage

DescriptionMjolnir is typically depicted as a large, square-headed gray lump hammer. It has a short, round handle wrapped in brown leather, culminating in a looped lanyard. 

It got lightnings covering it's hammer head, and glows a faint bluish color that looks like that of a Lightning.

 

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» ItemGreen Raincoat

Item type : Heavy Coat 

Quality: Perfect

Enhancement +3 Damage Mitigation

Shop:  The Lion's Den

Description : Large green raincoat that has a tail with pink ribbon attached with a pair of rabbit-ear hood

 

 

DENIED. Assuming that the type is clothing/leather armor (heavy coat is not a type), it cannot have damage mitigation.

 

» Name of ItemSvalinn

Type: Shield (Heavy Tower Shield)

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +1 Safe-Guard +2 Thorns

Description: A black and golden shield, depicting a story of demons and a young woman. Symbolic, no?

 

Approved.

 

» Name of ItemMjolnir

Type: Weapon (Mace)

Rarity: Perfect

Modifier: +2 Acc +1 Damage

DescriptionMjolnir is typically depicted as a large, square-headed gray lump hammer. It has a short, round handle wrapped in brown leather, culminating in a looped lanyard. 

It got lightnings covering it's hammer head, and glows a faint bluish color that looks like that of a Lightning.

 

 

 

Approved.

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