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Re-Evaluating my Familiar because there wasn't an evaluation system when I first received her, I think.

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Familiar Name: Hikari


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Hikari is a small Whimsical Weasel, a furry orange weasel with some noticeable differences.  Hikari has a long, spiral horn on her head, with two smaller ones poking out from the side of it.  Her body reaches around a meter long, enough to wrap around Grave's waist like a belt.  Her tail unravels into two to reveal a glassy blue sphere that gives off a luminescent glow.  A metal ring floats around the tail further up.  The Japanese character for 'light' (光 'Hikari') is painted on her chest.


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Name: Dragon Fang
Item type: Gauntlets
Quality: Perfect
Enchantments: [3 Unarmed Damage]
Description: A pair of gauntlets with pair of blades on top for added slashing attacks with its punches

Name: Zenith of Aegis
Item type: Heavy armor
Quality: Perfect
Enchantments: [2 Mitigation] [1 Thorn]
Description: A silver breastplate with a darker lining and fur collar. The added protection value of fur collar still remain questionable.

Name: Aurelian Shield
Item type: Heavy armor
Quality: Perfect
Enchantments: [1 Mitigation] [1 Thorn] [1 Heavy Momentum]
Description: A golden pauldron designed in the shape of a wolf's head on the right shoulder. 

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Name: Steel Gauntlets
Item type: MA Weapon
Tier: 1
Quality: Perfect
Enchantment: [3 Damage]
Description: A pair of steel gauntlets that were originally meant to protect the user's hand, but was discovered to be a great punching equipment.

Name: Silver Armor
Item Type: Heavy armor
Tier: 1
Quality: Perfect
Enchantments: [3 Mitigation]
Description: A silvery armor set that provide optimal protection, with the added feature of a fur collar around the shoulders. What protective value does fur collar provide remains a question.

Name: Pendant of Accuracy
Item Type: Trinket
Tier: 1
Quality: Perfect
Enchantments: [3 Accuracy]
Description: A small necklace pendant in the shape of a crosshair reticle, similar to those in first person shooting games, that provide added accuracy to attacks.

 

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Name: Dragon Fang
Item type: Gauntlets
Quality: Perfect
Enchantments: [3 Unarmed Damage]
Description: A pair of gauntlets with pair of blades on top for added slashing attacks with its punches

Name: Zenith of Aegis
Item type: Heavy armor
Quality: Perfect
Enchantments: [2 Mitigation] [1 Thorn]
Description: A silver breastplate with a darker lining and fur collar. The added protection value of fur collar still remain questionable.

Name: Aurelian Shield
Item type: Heavy armor
Quality: Perfect
Enchantments: [1 Mitigation] [1 Thorn] [1 Heavy Momentum]
Description: A golden pauldron designed in the shape of a wolf's head on the right shoulder. 

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Name: Steel Gauntlets
Item type: MA Weapon
Tier: 1
Quality: Perfect
Enchantment: [3 Damage]
Description: A pair of steel gauntlets that were originally meant to protect the user's hand, but was discovered to be a great punching equipment.

Name: Silver Armor
Item Type: Heavy armor
Tier: 1
Quality: Perfect
Enchantments: [3 Mitigation]
Description: A silvery armor set that provide optimal protection, with the added feature of a fur collar around the shoulders. What protective value does fur collar provide remains a question.

Name: Pendant of Accuracy
Item Type: Trinket
Tier: 1
Quality: Perfect
Enchantments: [3 Accuracy]
Description: A small necklace pendant in the shape of a crosshair reticle, similar to those in first person shooting games, that provide added accuracy to attacks.

 

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Name: Cook's Oven Mitts

Item Type: Profession Tools (Outdated Item Type)

Tier: 1

Quality: Perfect

Enhancements: +1 CD when crafting

Description: A pair of simple black oven mitts with crimson stitching. A white crowned lion logo in placed on the top side of the left glove, pulsating in a crimson color when in contact with high temperature.

Sale Link: 

Purchase Link: 

 

 

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Name: Scouting Spectacles

Item Type: Perfect Jewellery

Tier: 1

Quality: Perfect

Enhancements: 3 Loot Die

Description: A set of thin, wiry glasses with red-tinted lenses. When worn, they highlight hidden objects in blue, making them easier to find.

 

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Name: Scouting Spectacles

Item Type: Perfect Jewellery

Tier: 1

Quality: Perfect

Enhancements: 3 Loot Die

Description: A set of thin, wiry glasses with red-tinted lenses. When worn, they highlight hidden objects in blue, making them easier to find.

 

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Item: Baran's Breech Cloth

Item type : Light Armor

Quality: Demonic

Enhancement: +1 Mit +2 EVA +1 Insestial Fortitude

Description: Leather pants, with a bull's head design on the rump.

Post Links: http://www.sao-rpg.com/topic/14339-f3-event-boss-asterios-the-bull-king/?do=findComment&comment=520586

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Item: Baran's Breech Cloth

Item type : Light Armor

Quality: Demonic

Enhancement: +1 Mit +2 EVA +1 Holy Blessing

Description: Leather pants, with a bull's head design on the rump.

Post Links: http://www.sao-rpg.com/topic/14339-f3-event-boss-asterios-the-bull-king/?do=findComment&comment=520586

 

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Item: Baran's Breech Cloth

Item type : Light Armor

Quality: Demonic

Enhancement: +1 Mit +2 EVA +1 Insestial Fortitude

Description: Leather pants, with a bull's head design on the rump.

Post Links: http://www.sao-rpg.com/topic/14339-f3-event-boss-asterios-the-bull-king/?do=findComment&comment=520586

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Item: Baran's Breech Cloth

Item type : Light Armor

Quality: Demonic

Enhancement: +1 Mit +2 EVA +1 Holy Blessing

Description: Leather pants, with a bull's head design on the rump.

Post Links: http://www.sao-rpg.com/topic/14339-f3-event-boss-asterios-the-bull-king/?do=findComment&comment=520586

 

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Purchased from Shield:

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Name: Silver Lining
Crafters's Profession: Blacksmith
Crafter's Rank: 7 - High Mentor Blacksmith
ID: 75257
Roll: 10+2=12
Item Type: Shield
Quality: Perfect
Tier: 1
Enhancements: +3 Regen
Descriptions:  A convex, teardrop-shaped shield with a smooth, mirror-bright, silver surface


Cost: 300 Col

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Name: Soul Lining - Veteran
Crafters's Profession: Blacksmith
Crafter's Rank: 7 - High Mentor Blacksmith
ID: 75257
Roll: 10+2=12
Item Type: Shield
Quality: Perfect
Tier: 1
Enhancements: 2 Regen, Mitigation 1
Descriptions:  A convex, teardrop-shaped shield with a smooth, mirror-bright, silver surface. It seems warn with age, as if it had seen countless battles prior and has stood the test of time.

 

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Name: Silver Lining
Crafters's Profession: Blacksmith
Crafter's Rank: 7 - High Mentor Blacksmith
ID: 75257
Roll: 10+2=12
Item Type: Shield
Quality: Perfect
Tier: 1
Enhancements: +3 Regen
Descriptions:  A convex, teardrop-shaped shield with a smooth, mirror-bright, silver surface


Cost: 300 Col

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Name: Soul Lining - Veteran
Crafters's Profession: Blacksmith
Crafter's Rank: 7 - High Mentor Blacksmith
ID: 75257
Roll: 10+2=12
Item Type: Shield
Quality: Perfect
Tier: 1
Enhancements: 2 Regen, Mitigation 1
Descriptions:  A convex, teardrop-shaped shield with a smooth, mirror-bright, silver surface. It seems warn with age, as if it had seen countless battles prior and has stood the test of time.

 

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Item Name: Alediel's Grace
Item Tier: 4
Item Type: Two-Handed Straight Sword
Quality: Uncommon

Item Enhancements: Holy Damage
Description: A regal Longsword made from silver, the hilt surfaced with what appears to be gold. The weapon of a noble guardian, it is a bane to many evils.

 

 

Reason for Re-Evaluation: Used <<Essence of Steel>> x2

Link to Essence 1's Thread: https://www.sao-rpg.com/topic/19799-pp-f4-the-empowering-essence/

 

Link to Essence 2's Thread: https://www.sao-rpg.com/topic/20737-sp-f4-frost-and-venom/

 

 

 

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Item Name: Alediel's Grace
Item Tier: 4
Item Type: Two-Handed Straight Sword
Quality: Perfect

Item Enhancements: Holy Damage, Accuracy, Bleed
Description: A regal Longsword made from silver, the hilt surfaced with what appears to be gold. The weapon of a noble guardian, it is a bane to many evils.

 

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Item Name: Alediel's Grace
Item Tier: 4
Item Type: Two-Handed Straight Sword
Quality: Uncommon

Item Enhancements: Holy Damage
Description: A regal Longsword made from silver, the hilt surfaced with what appears to be gold. The weapon of a noble guardian, it is a bane to many evils.

 

 

Reason for Re-Evaluation: Used <<Essence of Steel>> x2

Link to Essence 1's Thread: https://www.sao-rpg.com/topic/19799-pp-f4-the-empowering-essence/

 

Link to Essence 2's Thread: https://www.sao-rpg.com/topic/20737-sp-f4-frost-and-venom/

 

 

 

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Item Name: Alediel's Grace
Item Tier: 4
Item Type: Two-Handed Straight Sword
Quality: Perfect

Item Enhancements: Holy Damage, Accuracy, Bleed
Description: A regal Longsword made from silver, the hilt surfaced with what appears to be gold. The weapon of a noble guardian, it is a bane to many evils.

 

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Item Name: Shadow Fury
Item Tier: 4
Item Type: Two-Handed Straight Sword
Quality: Uncommon

Item Enhancements: Fallen Damage
Description: A deadly blade that is rumored to have partaken in the destruction of legions. Forged from a mysterious metal, and radiating an energy that is unsettling to most, it is difficult to deny this rumor.

 

Reason for Re-evaluation: Used <<Essence of Steel>>
Link to essence thread: https://www.sao-rpg.com/topic/20736-pp-f4-getting-back-what-was-earned/

 

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tem Name: Shadow Fury
Item Tier: 4
Item Type: Two-Handed Straight Sword
Quality: Rare

Item Enhancements: Fallen Damage, Accuracy
Description: A deadly blade that is rumored to have partaken in the destruction of legions. Forged from a mysterious metal, and radiating an energy that is unsettling to most, it is difficult to deny this rumor.

 

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Item Name: Shadow Fury
Item Tier: 4
Item Type: Two-Handed Straight Sword
Quality: Uncommon

Item Enhancements: Fallen Damage
Description: A deadly blade that is rumored to have partaken in the destruction of legions. Forged from a mysterious metal, and radiating an energy that is unsettling to most, it is difficult to deny this rumor.

 

Reason for Re-evaluation: Used <<Essence of Steel>>
Link to essence thread: https://www.sao-rpg.com/topic/20736-pp-f4-getting-back-what-was-earned/

 

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tem Name: Shadow Fury
Item Tier: 4
Item Type: Two-Handed Straight Sword
Quality: Rare

Item Enhancements: Fallen Damage, Accuracy
Description: A deadly blade that is rumored to have partaken in the destruction of legions. Forged from a mysterious metal, and radiating an energy that is unsettling to most, it is difficult to deny this rumor.

 

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» Vampire of Anima +2 damage +1 life steel On Role of 8, 9, or 10 (Item equipped)

» Bracer of the people +1 accuracy (Equipped for the remainder of the RP it is in)

» Dragon shade Duster +2 accuracy +1 Thorns (Item equipped)

» Cloud Boots +2 evasion (Item equipped)

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Item Name: Vampire of Anima
Item Tier: 1
Item Type: 1HCS
Item Rarity: Perfect
Item Enhancements: Damage II, Vampiric Offensive I

Item Name: Dragon Shade Bracer
Item Tier: 1
Item Type: Trinket
Item Rarity: Perfect
Item Enhancements: Accuracy III

Item Name: Cloud Boots
Item Tier: 1
Item Type: Light Armor
Item Rarity: Rare
Item Enhancements: Evasion II

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my merchandise from my store need re-evaluated

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Item: leather Plated Leggings

Quality: Uncommon

Shop: Dragon Claw Needles

Description: A pair of leather leg armor is very light weights And very hard +1 damage mitigation

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Item: Turtle chest plate

Quality: Uncommon

Shop: Dragon Claw Needles

Description: A basic loose fitting chest plate. It has the texture and pattern of a sea turtle shell +1 damage mitigation

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Item: Turtle Leather helmet

Quality: Uncommon

Shop: Dragon Claw Needles

Description: A helmet as hard as a turtle shell. It also helps you from getting hit on the head by small boulders, +1 damage mitigation

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Item: The Promise Bracer

Quality: Perfect

Shop: Dragon Claw Needles

Description: A bracer aquamarine in color. It is superlight, +1 Thorns +2 Accuracy

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Item: Banshī sukurīmu (Banshee Scream)

Quality: Perfect

Shop: Dragon Claw Needles

Description: A coat pitch black in color. It is extremely light as well as durable +1 accuracy +2 damage mitigation

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Item: Cloud Boots

Quality: Rare

Shop: Dragon Claw Needles

Description: A pair of boots so light, they actually increase your speed +2 evasion

 

 

 

 

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my merchandise from my store need re-evaluated

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Item: leather Plated Leggings

Quality: Uncommon

Shop: Dragon Claw Needles

Description: A pair of leather leg armor is very light weights And very hard +1 damage mitigation

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Item: Turtle chest plate

Quality: Uncommon

Shop: Dragon Claw Needles

Description: A basic loose fitting chest plate. It has the texture and pattern of a sea turtle shell +1 damage mitigation

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Item: Turtle Leather helmet

Quality: Uncommon

Shop: Dragon Claw Needles

Description: A helmet as hard as a turtle shell. It also helps you from getting hit on the head by small boulders, +1 damage mitigation

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Item: The Promise Bracer

Quality: Perfect

Shop: Dragon Claw Needles

Description: A bracer aquamarine in color. It is superlight, +1 Thorns +2 Accuracy

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Item: Banshī sukurīmu (Banshee Scream)

Quality: Perfect

Shop: Dragon Claw Needles

Description: A coat pitch black in color. It is extremely light as well as durable +1 accuracy +2 damage mitigation

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Item: Cloud Boots

Quality: Rare

Shop: Dragon Claw Needles

Description: A pair of boots so light, they actually increase your speed +2 evasion

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Item Name: Leather Plated Leggings
Item Tier: 1
Item Type: Light Armor
Item Rarity: Uncommon
Item Enhancements: Mitigation I

Item Name: Turtle Plate
Item Tier: 1
Item Type: Light Armor
Item Rarity: Uncommon
Item Enhancements: Mitigation I

Item Name: Turtle Helmet
Item Tier: 1
Item Type: Light Armor
Item Rarity: Uncommon
Item Enhancements: Mitigation I

Item Name: Faded Shirt
Item Tier: 1
Item Type: Cloth Armor
Item Rarity: Perfect
Item Enhancements: Evasion III

Item Name: Banshī Sukurīmu
Item Tier: 1
Item Type: Light Armor
Item Rarity: Perfect
Item Enhancements: Mitigation II, Evasion I

 

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Was poked on edits yo my CS, so here's the old one

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 Aerial Ace
Cost: 10 SP
Action: Free Action
Requirement: ----

Effect: Stacks with Combat Skill [Charge]. As a free action, change the player's stance from [Standard] to [Aerial]. While in [Aerial] stance, on a [Sword Art]'s execution, the following changes are applied until the start of the next turn:

  • Damage is increased by (Sword Art Rank -1); Damage increased cannot dip below 0,
  • Energy cost of the Sword Art performed is increased by (Sword Art Rank),
  • Evasion is decreased by (Sword Art Rank),
  • Mitigation is decreased by (3 * Sword Art Rank * Player's Tier).

Description: With experience comes tinkering, and with tinkering comes innovation. Through rigorous training, Macradon had found a way for him to enhance his sword arts by adding momentum to his attacks by executing them mid-air. Aerial strikes hinders his basic dexterity while airbound, but provides more than enough power in return. The Aerial Ace style always has the sword in one hand when initiating a Sword Art to aide the user in nimbleness to jump into the air, while in the air the user presumes the sword art stance and activates their Sword Art.
Created by: Macradon
Creation Details: [here]

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 Aerial Ace
Cost: 10 SP
Action: Free Action
Requirement: ----

Effect: Stacks with Combat Skill [Charge]. As a free action, change the player's stance from [Standard] to [Aerial]. While in [Aerial] stance, on a [Sword Art]'s execution, the following changes are applied until the start of the next turn:

  • Damage is increased by Player's Tier.
  • Energy cost of the Sword Art performed is increased by (Sword Art Rank),
  • Evasion is decreased by (Sword Art Rank),
  • Mitigation is decreased by (2 * Sword Art Rank * Player's Tier).

Description: With experience comes tinkering, and with tinkering comes innovation. Through rigorous training, Macradon had found a way for him to enhance his sword arts by adding momentum to his attacks by executing them mid-air. Aerial strikes hinders his basic defensive dexterity while airbound, but provides more than enough power in return. The Aerial Ace style always has the sword in one hand when initiating a Sword Art to aide the user in nimbleness to jump into the air, while in the air the user presumes the sword art stance and activates their Sword Art.
Created by: Macradon
Creation Details: [here]

 

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Was poked on edits yo my CS, so here's the old one

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Chase DBP Happy.png"Everything here looks about right, yup."

YOUR EVALUATION HAS BEEN APPROVED BY CHASER.

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