Talath

[Talath 0]

Username - Talath

 

Real Name - Elrick Faerun

 

age - 16

 

Gender - Male

 

Height - 5'8''

 

 

 

 

 

 

Appearence :

 

If you auctually see Talath he has Black hair, Blue eyes. He has a slender look to himself and has somewhat messy hair. and always seems to be alone. But he also has an aura that seems like hes always to himself. Most players dont even regard him or even see him for they just dont care. He always wears dark green, Navy Blue, or even just black.

 

About:

Nobody really knows about Talath but as far as he has told anybody he was once a loner in school. He was always by himself except when he needed to work with others. But he had enough of that so he started to play with the nerve gear. He wasn't a beta tester but he just wanted to go somewhere where he could be himself. As he started to play even the people inside this game havn't noticed him yet. But thats just rumers right?

 

Virtues:

 

Protective - will always protect his loved ones, family, friends, or just people he doesnt know. if the trouble arises he will try to help in what ever way he can.

 

Leadership - When sombody needs to get something done he does it. He will even play the hero if it kills him. He might be a loner but when it comes to groups most people listen to him.

 

Honesty- No matter what the truth is he will say it. Even if it takes a while he will be blunt about it. He ates lying due to the fact that its not him

 

 

 

 

Flaws :

 

Stubborn- Unreasonably, often perversely unyielding; bullheaded. Firmly resolved or determined; resolute.

 

Blunt- Characterized by directness in manner or speech; without subtlety or evasion. Frank, callous, insensitive, brusque.

 

Bold- In a bad sense, too forward; taking undue liberties; over assuming or confident; lacking proper modesty or restraint; rude; impudent. Abrupt, brazen, cheeky, brassy, audacious.

 

 

 

Skills :

spent - 2

not spent - 0

 

Skills
Non-combat:
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Passive:
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Combat:
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Weapon skills:
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â–ºOne-Handed Straight Sword    Rank    (  1  /  5  )

 

 

Invintory :

10 Bread

15 Water

1 Single handed short sword (equiped)

Black Travlers clothing (Equiped)

 

 

Stats

 

HP ( 5 / 5 )

Damage ( 2 )

 

 

Col = 0

 

 

[Baldur 0]

You need to put a lot more information in here about who your character is. I'm not seeing much yet. The "no one really knows much about him" thing doesn't fly in this situation, since the information here isn't common knowledge. You need to elaborate on who your character is, what makes them who they are leading up to being trapped in the game. This section should at least be a long paragraph if not 2 or 3.

 

Also, you need at least 2 or 3 lines for each virtue and flaw. This is one of the most important parts of defining who your character is, so really put some thought into it.