Zephrynia 0 Posted May 17, 2015 #1 Share Posted May 17, 2015 Profile» Username: Black Kite» Real name: Zephrynia» Age: 17» Gender: Female» Height: 4,2» About: History/personality» Virtues:Kind-hearted (If you know her well)Gentle (If you know her well)Will not kill» Flaws:BluntCallousHumourlessProfession: NoneSkillsNon-combat:» CookingPassive:»TrappingCombat:»SlashWeapon skills:»Duel Blades (Can wield two swords quite well)InventoryWeapons/Tools:» Dark Storm Duel Swords ( Item name: Open Hearts) Roleplays NoneRelationships (optional)» Her Brother (Dead) Story Thus Far (optional)» Her brother was also originally in the game, but was player killed while she was unable to do anything about it. She only escaped because of a cursed item called 'Dark Storm' in her brothers inventory, that spiraled out of control when he died. She was not killed because it did not recognize her as an 'enemy'. The PK guild were destroyed and she feels like both their and her brother's deaths were her fault. She does not recognize anyone as a friend and was mentally destroyed by guilt, she will harm anyone if they approach her without warning but will not take a life. She still carries Dark Storm with her as a memory of her brother. It has no expiry date or limit, and is a very high level item that was dropped from an incredibly low level monster for no apparent reason. She is currently travelling alone, with no real purpose. She kills monsters only as often as she needs to and tries to avoid towns. Link to post Share on other sites
Mari 1 Posted May 17, 2015 #2 Share Posted May 17, 2015 Denied.please read through the Journal requirements.You need the following A profile/Journal pictures 3 virtues - each with at least 2 lines of description 3 Flaws - each with at least 2 lines of description You must change the following -You do not own the weapons you state you own. You only own a single, basic starter weapon of your choosing, there is a list provided in the Journal Tutorial. -Your 'story thus far' has multiple things wrong with it. You cannot have cursed items in SAO you do not own any item with that. Such a weapon does not and will not ever exist.The story thus far you have written is non canon, as it did not occur on the site. The story thus far section is for what occurs on site in the RP. - You CANNOT duel wield weapons -Your username is Zephrynia as it must be the same as your account name, it is not Black Heart I STRONGLY recommend reading through the Journal Tutorial and the site rules again before editing your journal. Please edit your journal viea the edit post button and PM me once ALL above changes have been made. Thank you. Gm Mari Link to post Share on other sites
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